Thank you! that is exactly the type of critique I am always looking for.
It was a little difficult with the lighting because space was restricted to place the lights where I wanted compared to the actual camera placement.
The shots in the beginning are more or less just the only establishing shots that I had a chance to get and to work with (thats why they were held long/not banger tricks), but I agree,
Sunset shot was ideally supposed to be an actual full sunset to kind of show the transition from day to night- it was just a shot I already had because I didn't have the chance to get a more legit time-lapse.
I definitely will fix the little things in the next one I make, though.
again, thank you for such an in-depth constructive criticism- it is much appreciated.
keep them coming
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