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Critique my edit

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MAC.D
Posts: 5654 - Karma: 344
any ideas? iv been making videos for a while. just looking for feedback.

http://media.nscdn.com/uploads/member/videos/124008391709.04.18.2.wmvhttp://media.nscdn.com/uploads/member/videos/124008391709.04.18.2.wmv
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Apr 18 2009 4:42PM
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EH_DUBS
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pretty sick i thought the colors looked really nice. and i enjoyed the editing at the end. the dual shot whatever youd call it


Apr 18 2009 4:49PM
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eheath
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Avoid big blank areas, i think it just shows lack of creativity.
Apr 18 2009 8:41PM
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mac.N.steeze
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it looks a little over edited
Apr 18 2009 9:15PM
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Willard
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song is fucking annoying
Apr 18 2009 10:28PM
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MAC.D
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when? like at the end when the screen rools over with the shot on the right?
Apr 19 2009 8:36AM
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Federation
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there really was not much to edit. Besides that I thought it was ok, but a little over edited.
Apr 19 2009 8:50AM
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