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Portrait - Critique

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t_walker
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I know you'd all rather be checking out ski photos but theres no snow up my way right now so let me know what you think about this shot. Haven't done much portrait stuff at all but was asked to do a senior photo by a good friend, this was one of the better shots of the day:

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Aug 18 2008 5:35PM
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followCam
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I like it. Im not really a fan of portrait photography alltogether but i think this one is good.

Good bokeh, not too distracting but still gives good colour.
Any more of your stuff?
Aug 18 2008 5:48PM
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Pippin
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one of the things i have learned over the years is cropping is really important. In this case the shot is great, good angle, great model pic, but if you didn't crop off the feet and cut down cause you have some space above the models head thus capturing the whole body and not cutting off at the legs...just IMHO
Aug 18 2008 5:55PM
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soup
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yea too much green.  drew me away from her tits.
Aug 18 2008 6:12PM
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t_walker
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yeah you can check out my other stuff at http://www.offtrailphoto.com
Aug 18 2008 8:28PM
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