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Jul 22 2012
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I made an edit with a friend of mine spent a day at a local skate park shooting and would love some constructive criticism!

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Jul 22 2012
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Jul 22 2012
11:54:22PM
really iked this, two things id change though: the title was abrupt, either put it at the beggening, or have it over your clip so its not an abrupt stop to a black scree....also take it easy with the slomo, other than that, super sick
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Jul 23 2012
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Quoting DubVision from Jul 22 2012 11:54:22:
really iked this, two things id change though: the title was abrupt, either put it at the beggening, or have it over your clip so its not an abrupt stop to a black scree....also take it easy with the slomo, other than that, super sick
Definitely feel yah on the title, looking back it is super abrupt! Thanks so much for the feedback! +K
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Jul 24 2012
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bump for more feedback
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Jul 24 2012
1:32:42PM
-i agree that the title needs work and you could have gone a little easier on the slomo.

-you had great stability but i do tend to get sick of straight follow cams. that being said, TRIPOD IS YOUR BESTEST FRIEND. use one.

-most of your shots were really tight to the skater. maybe take a few steps back and get the skater and more of the environment in your shots. (TRIPOD)
           - from a viewers stand point, I feel like seeing more of the area being captured is huge


good work though!
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