Instead of bouncing around so much, try and link like shots together. Do your ski shots, then your football shots, then interviews, then cars or something. I'm not sure if I like the randomness of the structure.
Also, some of your cropped shots work but some are not good. Don't be afraid to mix crop and full screen. This shows that you have an understanding of the difference in application. If you're cutting off a head, don't crop.