ben_collinsIdk not too harsh but give me the truth
Landing page is a bit wordy, I'd make it more simple. After you click the first button, I'd be visually pleasing if the next page was different in some sort of way a.k.a different background or bright buttons (not sure if this is possible). The text throughout reminds me of something a bit childish, like a website made for a high school computer class. Changing it to something a bit more professional might attract more customers (I don't know if that's a problem and it's not really my right to ask). I saw a few spelling/ grammatical errors so I'd be in your best interest to proofread everything again. Other than that I think the layout is pretty nice.
I got my link to work, so you can check out some of my work.
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