Critique my Edit

Skiing: Im gonna be blunt here, you didn't do a single trick in this edit that impressed me.

Filming: most of the filming was good. Stable, good tracking. No problems here.

Editing: Too many fillers for not enough skiing. Your cuts in the middle of tricks are too quick, you need to give wiggle room on the end of each clip so the viewers eye can catch up. Also, you do not need to be editing it to be super wide, if you aren't putting out impressive content people just get annoyed with the widescreen.

Final point: Fundamentally, the actual producing was sound. Don't worry about filming, give yourself time to improve as a skier and take the camera back out when you have something decent to point it at.

Skiing, poor. Filming bad. Poor composition, strange editing. By that I mean some of the shots didn't have the trick in in at all and lingered too long. With that being said you clearly have spirit and a want to improve, I'd suggest you rest the cinemascope for the moment.

Skiing wasn't on point, wasn't all too stable, some of the times you were cutting him out of the shot. cuts were pretty hard. Didnt seem like it flowed at all. Way too many cinematics.

Thanks for the feedback. Really appreciate it

bit harsh I thought, yeah the skiing was rubbish but filming wasn't too bad, if you used a stabilizer it would have been better for sure but headed in the right direction, music was weird

intro was pretty boring in my opinion could have been at least half the time

filming was pretty terrible if i have to be honest. there are some good shots in there but almost half of the skiing shots you can't even see the persons skis

song was a little boring as well


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