you have some really nice shots in there, esp. from the dumont cup. I'd get rid of that star timelapse: it feels kinda out of place and to me it pales in comparison to your other shots. Also, I might remove the two night shots with the dude shoveling and the snow in the light. if there were some night urban shots it would make more sense, but now them seem kind of arbitrary. I do understand that you probably need some filler so you can end on that last lyric.
Overall though, nice compositions, smooth pans, focusing, song choice, etc. really enjoyed it!