It felt more like a demo reel to me than a trailer for a narrative film. Maybe have some more exposition overlayed with the action stuff. Or whatever, it's just a trailer.
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I can agree. However, 30 of the 35min of the film is narrative with little montage. I really just wanted to keep people guessing, not give away too much and leave you intrigued. But yeah, next trailer I might give more exposition.
Looks funny. I don't think you need a ton more exposition, maybe just set up that the kid is trying to pay for college so the audience understands the "tuition" part. I would have liked a little more sound design during the montage section to amp up the action along with the music track and a more aggressive color pass would better sell your production value. It worked though; definitely sells the tone of the film.