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Longboard edit critique
It would be more entertaining if you didn't have just continuous panning shots for half of it. Add some more angles and different perspectives for next time.
Your friend's flatspot bugged me a lot throughout the whole thing, so there's that. Also, wide shot after wide shot after wide shot doesn't work, hardly ever. It's real important the mix it up. The motion tracking was shit, so I'd just take that out, or try to redo it with a shot that isn't so shaky. The titles also seemed out of place, like I feel as if they should have gone in the beginning, to go with your establishing shots. Other than that, just work on your stabilization when you're not on a tripod. I liked the song, and the cuts seemed nice for the most part, and your friends have some nice style.
For me, fuck style. i'm just trying not to land upside down.
My Visual Concoctions
I liked it. the long panning shots were nice, although you could have used more variations of shots, but I particularly liked the ones just a tiny bit in the woods. altogether pretty cool, I wish i was that good at skating
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