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2014 Urban Reel

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Aidan.Gilbert
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Hey guys,
I put together this edit from my season of filming urban, so let me know what you think. All critique is appreciated! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8QFrFaLI49I
May 3 2014 1:42AM
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Aidan.Gilbert
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https://www.newschoolers.com/videos/watch/709990/2014-Urban-Reel
May 3 2014 1:46AM
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op14
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Way too many "interlude" type shots. You definitely just added a bunch of unnecessary shots of everyone falling like 5 times on each rail to drag it out longer. Get rid of those and 90% of the unnecessary shots and it'll be cool. Making it longer doesn't necessarily mean it's a good edit.
May 3 2014 11:22AM
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StokeFactor
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You could've made it all fit in just the second song. I'd cut a lot of those bail shots, especially those that aren't that intense, and your brolls are sick but there's a bit too much of it. Also try not to cut the head of the skier when it's not a closeup shot, appart from that it was quite sick, I liked it.
May 3 2014 12:19PM
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Aidan.Gilbert
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outaouais_reppinYou could've made it all fit in just the second song. I'd cut a lot of those bail shots, especially those that aren't that intense, and your brolls are sick but there's a bit too much of it. Also try not to cut the head of the skier when it's not a closeup shot, appart from that it was quite sick, I liked it.


Alright thanks, I'll keep that stuff in mind!
May 3 2014 1:37PM
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