El_Barto.Thats not bad.
I kinda like the name .jpg
You could be all, ay yo J-peg...its time fo yo dinna. Then J-peg would be all "shut up foo, im chasing mice"
Wow. Gripping narrative. I really liked the rebellious attitude you ascribed to J-peg. You really conveyed the deep, underlying tensions within their relationship in so few words. He's trying to provide for J-peg, but J-peg, distracted by his youthful desires and ignorance, fails to see and appreciate this and it causes this unresolved, deep-set tension between the pair. Masterfully done.