Pretty cool with the black and white. Change your title style at the beginning, it felt too unprofessional for me. Make it a little bit shorter, most people will lose interest after about 2 minutes if its just an edit. Lastly, don't have every rail slide in slow mo it just drug everything out. Do slow mo on like a big trick or something. Hope this helped!
^Dudes definetly right, it shouldn't be this long, and every rail hit shouldn't be in slow mo because people will lose interest. Aside from the slow motion everything else. Really that's all I have, keep it up
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