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Wanna give my tune a listen and critique? its kind of pantyRaid/ish.

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Yung_Gnarley
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Green Eye by Knill


what would you change?
enjoy!
Oct 6 2013 3:43PM
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Yung_Gnarley
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bump?
Oct 7 2013 7:03PM
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panojibber.
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Would be a lot better if you improved your mix, nothing really sticks out. Drums are really weak, not punchy at all. There's not a whole lot of stuff going on dynamics-wise, so it sounds pretty boring.
As far as composition stuff goes I don't think its bad. Not my type of music but if you're stoked on what you're creating and think it has potential keep doing it. Really though, sound design and good mixes are what separate the men from the boys in the dance music world, and thats what you need to work on.
Oct 7 2013 7:16PM
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Yung_Gnarley
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word thank you. may i ask what you listened to it with? i want it to sound good on laptops and big systems alike.
Oct 7 2013 8:11PM
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panojibber.
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I used my 8" monitors.
Oct 7 2013 8:12PM
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Yung_Gnarley
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right on thank you.
Oct 7 2013 8:18PM
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Yung_Gnarley
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bump for a new tune. this ones long. feedback welcomed.

Neßular Convoy by Knillstar
Oct 12 2013 2:58AM
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Yung_Gnarley
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http://soundcloud.com/not_a_gangster/why-dont-y-u
Oct 18 2013 3:08PM
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