Don't touch the clowns, let the clowns touch you. -Donald Mahanahan
The universe is beautiful. It's something like a new woman that I was gonna date. You're dark and you're massive and you have a black hole, and all of those elements I want to explore just like you would explore on a new date. I want to dive deep into them and feel around and just see whats gonna come out of that. -Dr. Jimes Tooper
by send it out do you mean send it to try to get sponsorships? if so there's a few things i'd do, first your intro is too long, almost 30 seconds before the skiing gets going. second try to keep repeat tricks to a minimum. there's nothing wrong with an edit that's short and sweet, personally i'd take out a few of the sketchier landings as well. as for the couple shots you had that are very far away from the jump, maybe pair them with follows or close shots of you doing the same trick.
The camera angles and overall filming of this is what made this edit really cool. Whoever filmed this is REALLY good at choosing angles. All that needs to be cleaned up is the skiing(it wasn't bad, just a little sloppy at times), and then this edit would be amazing. It is crazy good for being your first edit too. How long did it take you to make it?