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Mountain bike edit critique

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Merrill
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Shot this video over a couple of mornings. It would be awesome if you would let me know what you guys like and what you dislike.
Sep 26 2013 11:18PM
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fupaface
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hell yeah man nice edit, where ever this is it looks fuckin sick
Sep 27 2013 12:20AM
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juicedrummer11
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that was sick. kept me entertained the whole time. loved the intro
Sep 27 2013 1:55AM
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j.benziger
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I thought that was a really sick video. Very well thought out and all. The song i think works really well for the intro but for the actually riding it doesnt really flow that much, because that song is more for like raw riding and your edit has a bunch of slow mo and really shallow depth of field shots. But other than that it was really good and I mean it
Sep 27 2013 11:22AM
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Merrill
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Thanks for the feedback guys. I was had kinda been thinking the same about the song so I switched things up for the riding part. The original link has been replaced with the new version so if you guys could take a look and give me some more feedback that would be great!
Sep 29 2013 10:42PM
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JimmyB
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Solid video man! I liked the choice is music. To me, the second song fits perfect.

There is only two things I would have changed. (not that there is anything wrong with them - just personal preference) On the intro shot I would have left that a static shot instead of panning with the truck. The credit at the end is a very overlooked part of the video. Try and find a cleaner looking font and make it smaller. It just cleans up the end and looks more professional that way.


Sep 30 2013 11:30AM
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Merrill
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Thanks, one last bump. Anybody?
Oct 3 2013 9:52AM
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j.benziger
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Changing the second song gave the edit so much more flow. Once again great job

Oct 3 2013 7:51PM
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4outtoface
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Nice job man! The intro is really well done! What type of camera did you shoot this on? The slow mo looks really nice.
Oct 4 2013 9:27AM
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Squeenerd
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Really sick edit man. Very well thought out and put together. Keep up the good work!
Oct 6 2013 3:39PM
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Merrill
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Thanks guys, I shot it on a t2i. Everything thing slow was shot in 60fps and the rest was shot 24fps.
Oct 9 2013 10:27AM
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SnorkBoard
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Where was this shot?
Oct 9 2013 12:54PM
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spliff.Life
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that was sick!!! and yes where you shredding at?
Oct 9 2013 1:03PM
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