Shots are okay, I mean, nothing ugly but nothing brilliant either.
But I didn't get what you're trying to show the viewer. What are you trying to show, what do you want us to see and why ? (ok don't answer these questions now, but before shooting you must ask yourself, "Why am I doing this"). Some fade transitions weren't justified, some were.
- "There's a thin line between adventure and suicide, the thinner the line the better the adventure"