Thanks everyone for the input, its really helpful!!
@penguiin I know I definitely should have shortened it. Thanks!
@ehv I know what your saying, I have seen A LOT of really long ones though so I am not really sure how I feel haha thanks for the input though!
@sklar Thanks so much for your detailed critique! Things definitely got repetitive with movements and comps, it was my first one so I didn't really know what I wanted. I was trying to edit with the song and it ended up being pretty long but ill try and improve for my next one! Thanks!
@Moosen I'm not sure what you mean by "color grading", I edited all the timelapses in LR but I'm not sure if color grading would have really helped? But yea i definitely should have shortened it. Thanks!