For a song like that, the slo-mo worked fine.
Some of the things I noticed (and I'm no professional edit critic):
- Too long: for a song like that and the heavy use of slomo, that edit felt kinda long
-Order: This is not a big deal at all, but I do like it when the shots in edits go by mountain, so you'll have all the shots from ______ and all the shots from ______ separate.
-Ending: The ending was pretty abrupt, again, not a big deal however.
Overall I liked it. I think if it was a little bit shorter it'd be much more entertaining.