Nice work, I liked the vibe and song choice. Two things that I would look out for in future videos:
- Make sure that you are considering the composition of your shots. For example, at 00:16 and 00:22, the flag/pier poll are cut off at the top. I find this distracting because it draws the viewer's eyes to that point and we want to see the full object. Its kind of like cropping off the top of someones head.
- I would also cut the shots to the music to help it flow better since they are all scenery shots with little action.