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n8877
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I just started making some rap beats and everyone I've showed them to so far tells me they're alright, can I get some candid feedback form anyone. +k for people who subscribe


Aug 25 2013 8:30PM
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DENIM_CHICKEN
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They could be better if you add more layers of strings, but the build up is great. The sampling of the piano and strings really add a climactic element to the piece. The synths are a nice touch too. The drums are a little generic, it would be nice to spice it up with a snare or hi-hat, other than just a kick drum and a clap. Overall it was pretty good. What equiptment / software did you use to make this?
Aug 25 2013 8:45PM
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pink_squid
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6/10


leagues away from anything I could do sooo props
Aug 25 2013 10:21PM
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McLS
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bit too repetitive in my opinion, maybe have a bigger build up with the strings (and end up with a full orchestra sound). Could had some more complex drums (doubles on bass drum is always nice) and some kind of fills at the end of sequences. Overall its pretty sick tho, what software u use?
Aug 26 2013 6:00AM
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sNaubi
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This guy is the bomb when it comes to violin


Aug 26 2013 6:34AM
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270on420out
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Pretty good, 7.5/10
Aug 26 2013 6:59AM
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maximiliaan
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LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLO ROFLCOPTER LMFAO etc.... -1
Aug 26 2013 7:10AM
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Bateman
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List of people OP showed song to:

Mom
Dad
Sister
Mrs.Harris (Gym Teacher)
Aug 26 2013 7:30AM
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n8877
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Yeah thanks man, drum sequence is a good idea.

Software I used to make this: Fl Studios 10
Aug 26 2013 3:54PM
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DENIM_CHICKEN
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You didn't use an mpc or anything? Thats impressive
Aug 26 2013 4:42PM
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n8877
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Yeah mpc is like $1000, haha don't have enough money
Aug 27 2013 4:09PM
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DENIM_CHICKEN
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WellI didn't mean mpc specifically, I meant a midi controller. This one is like a hundred, and you can find controllers on ebay for super cheap. I would look into investing in one, it will step up your production SO much.

Aug 27 2013 4:19PM
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last_tango
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There is something with the transition of the actual violin that seems rough.

This is the smoothest transition with a violin with and hip hopish beat that I have heard.

Now I'm not saying that you should copy this but be inspired and give you ideas. All of diplo's old shit is dope.
Aug 27 2013 5:16PM
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n8877
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Wow yeah damn that midi controller looks nice
Aug 27 2013 9:55PM
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_DUSTY_
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Sounds l great for a start, definitely make sure you are using all of the sonic space though, it sounds like there is a lot of sound in the low-mid end but nothing in the high end. When mastering try and add some brightness to the track, some snares and hi hats could help as well.
Aug 28 2013 12:06AM
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