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Critique please: A Collection Of Adventures

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Squeenerd
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Logged a bunch of shots over the past year or so and this is what I came up with. Tell me what you think!

Jul 26 2013 12:46PM
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Joshua.
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I really liked it! It was very eclectic, but you made it work. Good song choice.

The only thing I didn't love was the wind sound in your ski shot. Other than that, solid video.
Jul 26 2013 1:48PM
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raymondcabral
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Footage looks awesome, but for some of the freehand stuff I would try to get a steadycam of some sort just to reduce some of the shakyness. Editing was awesome too!
Jul 26 2013 1:54PM
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homestar
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The videos all looked really good. The editing was pretty good but there's one thing I would have changed. The videos seem to be in sort of a random order. I think it would have been better if you put the shots from each location together. It would also be kind of cool if you did it in chronological order but that doesn't really matter.
Jul 26 2013 2:06PM
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Van_Wilder
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Totally agree with this guy. All in all. the video kept me interested all the way through. awesome work!!
Jul 27 2013 11:57PM
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Squeenerd
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Thanks guys! I really appreciate it! Anyone else?
Aug 3 2013 11:52AM
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TheMort
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Didn't like the random order of the shots at first, but by the end it kind of grew on my, can't say it was a bad idea assuming it was a random edit.

Any idea what font you used for the title?

I would agree that taking the wind out on the ski shot would've been nice, some original video sound is always nice as long as its mild or adds to the song, but the wind there was a little overpowering.

Overall good though!
Aug 3 2013 2:50PM
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