That was a hell of a lot better than the first one. I think you could still work on the colors for example the snow was over-exposed so you lost details so it didn't have that professional feel but you could fix that next time filming. As for the editing it was pretty decent once you got into it and the length of the edit was long enough to show you good clips but short enough to not get boring. Overall a really decent edit.
Thanks once again! Means a lot! Yea I see what you're saying, I cant really fix the snow all to much from behind my computer (I can do a little), I'll make sure to raise the f-stop or something next season.