Things that stood out to me:
Who cares that you are type 3, tell us your style, playful vs charger, etc
Tell us how many days you skied them and where
Tell us where you mounted the bindings
Quality stuff doesn't need to be that long if there is nothing wrong, basically tell us if there is a problem but if they are just another pair of well made skis don't worry about it.
Compare stiffness to other skis
Of course it is a 90mm waist park tool but is it a good one?
Can you really already tell it is going to last?
Anyway nice job, I am not trying to put you down at all but rather to help you out, by pointing out your what I saw I am not trying to say that I would do any better but rather point out what I noticed. I am stoked that you are writing reviews, skiing needs more reviews. For NS this is a great review, If you really want to work on writing good reviews check out Blister gear review, they write some of the best reviews I have ever written,
Hope this helps.