i thought it was actually really good, it was super well done and stable and had good framing for most of it, try to keep your subject in the middle of the frame though some points it was a little low but other than that good edit
try to get some different angles and also include still frames, it's nice to follow with the cam but not all the time. music was a bit aggressive and slightly too fast paced for the speed of the shots imo.
all in all pretty nice edit though, stoked for more!
any landing you can walk away from is a good landing