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Trailer Critique

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homestar
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This is the early season trailer for a short film I'm working on. I'm looking for general critiques and advice. I also want to start doing color correction in the future so it would be great if you could point out any parts that look like they need color correction. Thanks!

Jan 14 2013 6:15PM
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homestar
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Bump. Thanks for the feedback DaBears +k
Jan 15 2013 7:27PM
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homestar
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Last bump
Jan 16 2013 8:39PM
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JAHrig
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Not bad, I like that you guys are going out and having fun and making something out of it. That being said, the main thing that would make it look more professional is making sure all of the shots are white balanced at the same color temperature. You had some shots that were very blue, and then the next shot would be a very warm orange color, or even true white. It will all flow together better and look more professional if you match them all to the look you want. Also maybe think about trimming out some of the weaker shots of small sketch 360 and just leave the bigger stuff or more aesthetically pleasing shots. Keep up the good work, practice makes perfect (or closer to perfect)
Jan 17 2013 2:41AM
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Soja.
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ill say what i usually say when it comes to videos, i think mixing up the angles and follow cams make it a lot more interesting, as well as what the guy above me said the white balance being the same throughout will be a great improvement
Jan 17 2013 11:03AM
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