Figure out some way to stabilize your shots. It was bouncing all over the place, and framed or tilted weird, even on what looked to be stationary shots. Just hard to watch. I think getting good at that mostly just takes practice. Also turn down the volume on some of those clips. The whooshing sounds of the wind was kind of annoying after a while. Your colors looked pretty good to me, though.
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