First off the audio quality is really bad (not sure whats going on there, it just sounds really staticy and grainy - the first song at least), and the edit is really long. Didn't watch the whole 10 minute thing. On some of the shots (for example if you pause at 1:05) there's flame blending/ghosting that looks really bad. Not really that bad of an edit, but way too long to be interesting, and the content wasn't very interesting either (you should cut out the boring parts).
"you know when you see a edit with there colors boosted and they really hd?" -coleaddison
"When there are more people in your organization who believe Obama is a Muslim than believe in the theory of evolution, there is a problem." -colbert