Dope! I like this very much, nice work.
A few things:
The kick is a good sound but a bit too loud (in my opinion... I'm listening to it on my monitors though).
You might want to do your own little master too, looking at the waveform of the track you have some massive peaks that you'll want to get rid of, I'm not saying to squash the dynamics out of it but some compression or limiting would probably do it good (after you've got the kick turned down).
Overall though very nice work, I've actually listened to the whole thing twice which doesn't happen too often! Haha
Just out of curiosity, what are your levels like in your mix, where's stuff peaking?
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