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j.benziger
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A new Fall Summer Setup edit I made i am pretty stoked on how it turned out...

But I would like to see what you guys think?

Oct 12 2012 5:18PM
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Sklar
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You did a good job mixing up the shots, but now focus on mixing up your cuts. Every shot was full drop-in to landing, single angle. Get multiple shots of a trick so you can match the clips, mixing up shot lengths will help keep the piece dynamic and flowing (keeping the viewer engaged), it's like varying your sentence length in writing.
It started very abruptly, think about ways to better introduce the edit
the part at the end with no music was kind of odd, too
Oct 12 2012 6:03PM
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DIX~
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Boring imo. Mix in some lifestyle shots or something, rather than just showing trick after trick after trick. Also, multiple angles of a shot would work wonders
Oct 12 2012 6:14PM
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j.benziger
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I was going to try to add some lifestyles and some multiple angles but for half of the shots I actually wasn't there i had to leave so i told my friend to press record on a tripod. I only made this edit with the shots i had because technically my winter started today whoop whoop!!! Oregon. So i really wanted to add some of those shots but I might want to make an edit because we aren't gonna hit the setup again for a while.
Oct 13 2012 12:45AM
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j.benziger
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I was going to try to add some lifestyles and some multiple angles but for half of the shots I actually wasn't there i had to leave so i told my friend to press record on a tripod. I only made this edit with the shots i had because technically my winter started today whoop whoop!!! Oregon. So i really wanted to add some of those shots but I might want to make an edit because we aren't gonna hit the setup again for a while.
Oct 13 2012 12:45AM
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j.benziger
Posts: 688 - Karma: 8,007
I was going to try to add some lifestyles and some multiple angles but for half of the shots I actually wasn't there i had to leave so i told my friend to press record on a tripod. I only made this edit with the shots i had because technically my winter started today whoop whoop!!! Oregon. So i really wanted to add some of those shots but I might want to make an edit because we aren't gonna hit the setup again for a while.
Oct 13 2012 12:45AM
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j.benziger
Posts: 688 - Karma: 8,007
I was going to try to add some lifestyles and some multiple angles but for half of the shots I actually wasn't there i had to leave so i told my friend to press record on a tripod. I only made this edit with the shots i had because technically my winter started today whoop whoop!!! Oregon. So i really wanted to add some of those shots but I might want to make an edit because we aren't gonna hit the setup again for a while.
Oct 13 2012 12:45AM
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j.benziger
Posts: 688 - Karma: 8,007
I was going to try to add some lifestyles and some multiple angles but for half of the shots I actually wasn't there i had to leave so i told my friend to press record on a tripod. I only made this edit with the shots i had because technically my winter started today whoop whoop!!! Oregon. So i really wanted to add some of those shots but I might want to make an edit because we aren't gonna hit the setup again for a while.
Oct 13 2012 12:45AM
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j.benziger
Posts: 688 - Karma: 8,007
I was going to try to add some lifestyles and some multiple angles but for half of the shots I actually wasn't there i had to leave so i told my friend to press record on a tripod. I only made this edit with the shots i had because technically my winter started today whoop whoop!!! Oregon. So i really wanted to add some of those shots but I might want to make an edit because we aren't gonna hit the setup again for a while.
Oct 13 2012 12:45AM
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j.benziger
Posts: 688 - Karma: 8,007
I was going to try to add some lifestyles and some multiple angles but for half of the shots I actually wasn't there i had to leave so i told my friend to press record on a tripod. I only made this edit with the shots i had because technically my winter started today whoop whoop!!! Oregon. So i really wanted to add some of those shots but I might want to make an edit because we aren't gonna hit the setup again for a while.
Oct 13 2012 12:45AM
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j.benziger
Posts: 688 - Karma: 8,007
I was going to try to add some lifestyles and some multiple angles but for half of the shots I actually wasn't there i had to leave so i told my friend to press record on a tripod. I only made this edit with the shots i had because technically my winter started today whoop whoop!!! Oregon. So i really wanted to add some of those shots but I might want to make an edit because we aren't gonna hit the setup again for a while.
Oct 13 2012 12:45AM
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j.benziger
Posts: 688 - Karma: 8,007
I was going to try to add some lifestyles and some multiple angles but for half of the shots I actually wasn't there i had to leave so i told my friend to press record on a tripod. I only made this edit with the shots i had because technically my winter started today whoop whoop!!! Oregon. So i really wanted to add some of those shots but I might want to make an edit because we aren't gonna hit the setup again for a while.
Oct 13 2012 12:45AM
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j.benziger
Posts: 688 - Karma: 8,007
I was going to try to add some lifestyles and some multiple angles but for half of the shots I actually wasn't there i had to leave so i told my friend to press record on a tripod. I only made this edit with the shots i had because technically my winter started today whoop whoop!!! Oregon. So i really wanted to add some of those shots but I might want to make an edit because we aren't gonna hit the setup again for a while.
Oct 13 2012 12:45AM
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j.benziger
Posts: 688 - Karma: 8,007
I was going to try to add some lifestyles and some multiple angles but for half of the shots I actually wasn't there i had to leave so i told my friend to press record on a tripod. I only made this edit with the shots i had because technically my winter started today whoop whoop!!! Oregon. So i really wanted to add some of those shots but I might want to make an edit because we aren't gonna hit the setup again for a while.
Oct 13 2012 12:45AM
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j.benziger
Posts: 688 - Karma: 8,007
I was going to try to add some lifestyles and some multiple angles but for half of the shots I actually wasn't there i had to leave so i told my friend to press record on a tripod. I only made this edit with the shots i had because technically my winter started today whoop whoop!!! Oregon. So i really wanted to add some of those shots but I might want to make an edit because we aren't gonna hit the setup again for a while.
Oct 13 2012 12:45AM
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j.benziger
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well that got fucked up oh well

Oct 13 2012 12:49AM
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