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Critique: SUMMER DAZE // ABOVE&BEYOND

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BeerWeed
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I rarely post on Newschoolers anymore and have taken my cinematography/editing in new directions, but I remember it always being a great place to receive feedback from amazing artists. Would love to hear some thoughts/suggestions on this short edit I produced. Thank you.




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Aug 12 2012 3:28PM
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powninja
Posts: 1053 - Karma: 242
Nice Work! On point and great color correction.
Aug 12 2012 3:34PM
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Wheat
Posts: 375 - Karma: 1,633
What were the fonts you used in the title? Great edit!
Aug 12 2012 4:19PM
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hardig1234
Posts: 291 - Karma: 206
agree what did you use to color correct?
Aug 12 2012 9:51PM
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h.robarge
Posts: 1283 - Karma: 1,798
what camera do you use to film with?
Aug 19 2012 11:06PM
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BeerWeed
Posts: 180 - Karma: 563
tee two hay
Aug 22 2012 1:27AM
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jkauffman22
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Aug 22 2012 3:28AM
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sweatshirt
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Aug 22 2012 5:30AM
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monkatizer
Posts: 4704 - Karma: 1,518
get the kids asscrack out of there at the end


other than that it was amazing
Aug 22 2012 7:26PM
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A.Haydenluck
Posts: 80 - Karma: 1,423
ruuning lincoln near the end was dope, haha it was like watching a video on instagram
Aug 24 2012 3:03AM
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j-cal
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Hey,

I like the video overall. But i must say at some points you put to much hase in the color grade. other than that it was great. Keep up with this look your aiding to you videos and realy dial it down it will look so sick when you have figured out all to the look your going for!

Thaks,

Jake
Aug 24 2012 11:55AM
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BeerWeed
Posts: 180 - Karma: 563
I learned the most from your comment, and I agree with it completely. Thanks for the help.
Dec 8 2012 2:15AM
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WhatPlantsCrave
Posts: 20 - Karma: 15
really enjoyed it

however for me the color grading was a bit too yellow at some points and took away from the other colors, i think if you took down the yellows just a touch you could still have the warm summery feel and still allow the other colors to pop.  im not a huge fan of vignette either and it was a little overwhelming at some points but that is just me.

otherwise great stuff man keep up the good work
Dec 8 2012 2:59AM
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