Alright lets start off with the good.
-Song was awesome
-The ending was somewhat funny, maybe if you shortened it up a bit it would've been better
-Some of the audio ex. when he throws the fish into the lake
- I cannot stand the gopro audio, take it out
- Trim the clips by snapping them together with the beat of the song, try and stay clear of those transitions
- Color correcting would make it 10x better
- Shorten it a lot, I lost interest about 30-45 seconds in
Thats about what i have, hope this helped!