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Critique a Skate Edit

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kook.lyfe
Posts: 157 - Karma: 1,944
I made an edit with a friend of mine spent a day at a local skate park shooting and would love some constructive criticism!

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Jul 22 2012 10:49PM
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kook.lyfe
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Jul 22 2012 10:53PM
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Dub_Digital
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really iked this, two things id change though: the title was abrupt, either put it at the beggening, or have it over your clip so its not an abrupt stop to a black scree....also take it easy with the slomo, other than that, super sick
Jul 22 2012 11:54PM
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kook.lyfe
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Definitely feel yah on the title, looking back it is super abrupt! Thanks so much for the feedback! +K
Jul 23 2012 2:09AM
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kook.lyfe
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bump for more feedback
Jul 24 2012 1:00AM
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dunesquirrel
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-i agree that the title needs work and you could have gone a little easier on the slomo.

-you had great stability but i do tend to get sick of straight follow cams. that being said, TRIPOD IS YOUR BESTEST FRIEND. use one.

-most of your shots were really tight to the skater. maybe take a few steps back and get the skater and more of the environment in your shots. (TRIPOD)
           - from a viewers stand point, I feel like seeing more of the area being captured is huge


good work though!
Jul 24 2012 1:32PM
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NickSki.
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You cut more heads than the french revolution.
Jul 24 2012 2:27PM
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