Pretty good. i think you did a pretty good job of showing the whole place and showing what it has to offer.
a few things i didn't care for too much was the overlays of footage at the beginning. i think maybe if you would have just had those without them overlapping, just quicker cuts, it could have been a little more effective only because i couldn't really tell if that was stuff they sell or just had for show.
you had some good shots in there but i think some got a little too tight, maybe have a shot or two as wide as your lens will go just to kind of show the whole place overall.
but i liked it, makes me want to check it out for sure
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