I gonna have to go with Brian here. I realize you wanted to show the resort from the park side because that's what it may be more known for, but, try to actually show to resort. Pull the viewer in more and make them want to get out of their chair and head there right now. Yes you showed skiing going on, but that was all.
Just trying to as said already, show a theme and more of the resort. Not just random shots of skiers and snowboarders !
Good job though