It needed more shots from several angles in some scenes. The shots dragged on I found. I think the story could have been told a little better with some more time put in, the whole thing feels rushed. It was a cool concept for the story, but as the director the audience doesn't always know what your'e thinking, short shots of simple things can convey a lot about the story without actually doing that much.
Apart from that I thought it was pretty cool! The glidecam shots were nice on the hill and the ending was good!
I am Canadian.