That was tough to watch IMO, every shot was so shakey, work on them tripod shots a bit and it'll get better. I also noticed you had some exposure trouble, it looked like you were using the camera on auto, you should set exposure manually so that it doesnt change while you're shooting. Also, alot of the shots were way too tight, zoom out more next time. You have to remember even though its hard to see on your LCD, its going to be 20 times bigger on your computer.
Thanks for the response, i'm fairly new to making edits. It was a last minute decision to head to the event and film with some friends and ill admit I didn't really no what I was doing. Hopefully the next one will be better!