it is ok to fool around and film and everything but you want us to critique your edit......really or do you just want us to watch it........... imo when you ask for a critique it is because you put a lot of effort in the editing, camera angles etc........... and the fact you write ''this shit yo'' just sounds like a 10 years old boy who just want people to see his edit........ dont get me wrong it is my opinion. at least you could have fix the framing before rendering...just saying
“I contend that we are both atheists. I just believe in one fewer god than you do. When you understand why you dismiss all the other possible gods, you will understand why I dismiss yours.” Stephen Roberts
I like what you were trying to do with the intro. But this isn't a serious edit. I'll be quite honest, the transition from the slow song to the rap completely lost me and I stopped watching when I saw Aunt Jemima. It's fun to throw stuff like that into a fun edit that shows the day, but if you want a serious, critique-able edit, you gotta try harder than this to cut this shit and put together something truly cohesive.
I know that sounds pretty harsh, but take from it what you will and learn. I'm sure that if you're serious about making a serious edit, you can do it - everything is there - but I'll be honest, this isn't it.
OP: "If you suddenly skied off a huge fuckin cliff and you only had time to throw one last trick before you died, what would it be?"
Malcolm: "id probably just flail my self to death"
"If the overall quality of your film depends on what you shot it on, you aren't ready to make a film." - Barry Green
Ok sorry guys this was a joke edit. when i said it was serious i was being sarcastic. I am sorry for posting it asking for a critique we dont actually thinks its a well made edit. Just like our last one we like to have fun, maybe we will actually make a serious one soon....but probably not =)
here was our last edit also obviously a joke thug edit....
ok. so you made a mistake by making it? it just seems like it was a waste of time, or that you were wanting a serious critique but people said that the video didn't look serious, so by default: "jk I was trolling". Not to hate man, lets not start another stupid argument haha. good on you for filming with your friends and gavin fun!