I liked a lot of those shots, particularly the shot of the couple looking for directions. I'm not sure why you called it Boston though, even if it is just a practice. From an outsiders perspective (I've never visited Boston properly), almost all of those shots could have been filmed in hundreds of cities around the world.
I know you said it's not a proper Boston edit, but maybe it will still help you think of stuff to shoot by hearing me say I'd love to get a feel for what makes your city unique and interesting. Hope that helps cage your efforts on your next edit, I'm stoked on the style and would love to see the final product!
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