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belden...
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So this is my first time really filming as I got a camera (as you guessed gopro!) for christmas and got to use it for the first time yesterday. Now I edited this morning with iMovie because I couldn't find Premiere Pro online for free and don't really know the ins and outs of final cut pro. Other than the far away filming what can I improve on?

Grey Days from Sam Belden on Vimeo.

Jan 22 2012 4:19PM
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MLeone
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I mean that was an alright edit. I'd suggest getting better stabilization, getting tighter shots too. And also I mean if you serious about filming, I would consider a better camera. Good job though man, looked alright
Jan 22 2012 6:44PM
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FatWhore
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Make it full screen (no black bars), but more importantly, GET CLOSER TO THEACTION!
Jan 22 2012 6:48PM
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Shza.
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Get closer in, and get some type of stabilization. Maybe invest in a nicer camera too.
Jan 22 2012 11:15PM
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FerrisBueller
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i enjoyed it man looks like you guys had fun and it had a chill vibe
Jan 22 2012 11:18PM
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Gknow
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hell yeah carinthia, i like it cause of that. Also, chill vibe. get MUCH closer with the wide angle go pro lens. Edit fit the music, right on
Jan 22 2012 11:34PM
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belden...
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Yeah it was my first time filming with it. so i didnt know how close you could get (apparently a lot closer than that) but thanks guys. Also whats up with the bars haha how do i get rid of them?
Jan 23 2012 9:48PM
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MLeone
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^^ what editor are you using?
Jan 24 2012 2:40PM
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