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Feedback on a new edit

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That_One_Dude
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Haven't made an edit in a while, first one of the year. +k for positive and/or constructive feedback on it. If you like it leave a comment and rate! Thanks guys.

Jan 11 2012 5:43PM
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CrotchKiller
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this is crotchkillers mom. Crotchkiller is currently bleeding out of his ears and muttering about dubberstep on the floor. i hope your happy
Jan 11 2012 6:10PM
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family_vacation
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I tried to watch it, I really did.

However that song was awful even by dubstep standards. Those are pretty low standards...
Jan 11 2012 6:18PM
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That_One_Dude
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I realize dubstep is overused now, in my defense i couldn't find anything christmasy or festive. I haven't used dubstep in a while. Other than the song any other feedback?
Jan 11 2012 6:22PM
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MLeone
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How about start with blatant obvious feedback, stabilization, and under/overexposures. Also randoms shots? like your dog? wtf?
Jan 11 2012 9:12PM
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That_One_Dude
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Chill dude I was back from school for Christmas and missed my dog so I put him in for a shot in a short intro. You don't have to be a dick dude. To the guy right above me, thank you +k for first constructive response
Jan 12 2012 3:34AM
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WillStart
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other people told you not to use a song like that again. that is constructive. just because you don't agree with it doesn't mean it isn't constructive.


also, take this into consideration: did you REALLY want honest feedback when you made this thread? or did you just want us to say nice things about a video that seems more like it was made for the enjoyment of you and your friends than the entire internet? based on what you said about the shot of your dog, it sounds like you edited the video based on what YOU and YOUR FRIENDS would appreciate, not the NS audience. there's nothing wrong with that at all! i love making videos like that. but if you're going to ask for feedback, don't get so defensive when people criticize a part of it that your NS audience won't/can't appreciate.
Jan 12 2012 3:49AM
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skithedirt
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Ding ding ding... we have a winner
Jan 12 2012 9:31AM
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That_One_Dude
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I was trying to make a generally good video towards the ns audience. I accept I made a poor song choice and what other people said about exposure and some shakiness. I made the thread because all my friends liked it and no one gave me anything to improve on. Thanks for the detailed response, it had alot of good things to keep in mind.
Jan 12 2012 10:46AM
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ThugNasty
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Well bro, the edit was alright for the most part good tricks and riding. But like everyone else did say the music didnt really work and the dog shot threw me off.  Im not a huge fan of a falls section. but other than that really it was a good edit! keep it up! +K
Jan 12 2012 11:42AM
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MLeone
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I wasn't being a dick, I was giving my critique but ok. Being defensive about your work when people give you feedback just wont make your videos any better but why do I care..
Jan 12 2012 4:07PM
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That_One_Dude
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I guess I took your response the wrong way, i'll take the blame on that and I should not have gotten defensive when I asked for feedback. I just didn't expect so much hate on one shot of my dog in the intro but now I know. Thanks to all the responses so far, keep em coming.
Jan 12 2012 6:50PM
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LikeALion
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good editing but u need some different music chach
Jan 12 2012 9:24PM
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Jan 12 2012 9:35PM
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eheath
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I don't really know where to start man, I feel like the negatives are very obvious. I don't understand how you put this edit together and actually thought it was a good piece of work to show NS. The song, the editing, the filming was all very sub par and all needs to be worked on. You can't just aim a gopro at someone, chop together clips and expect something awesome. You've taken a step back but just take this feedback/hate(happens) and apply it to your next video.
Jan 12 2012 9:39PM
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.spaghetticat.
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the better SCM (now SCP) will can give u some pointers if u would like ;)
Jan 12 2012 10:55PM
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Moosen
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That song made me want to kill myself. and I like dubstep....
Jan 13 2012 3:20AM
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Boooshank
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Tune was ok.

I giggled at the back fails. Music seemed to fit with the bloopers. Funny huh!
Jan 13 2012 5:59AM
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