stabilization and having the second camera that was the standard aspect ratio just mixed in throws me off a bit. Oh and I didn't like the repetition of the pumpkin at the end. I' don't have an eye for color much myself so can't help you there.
super nice vibe, but the clip sizing change kind of ruined it for me. stabilization also would have immensely helped but I think it came off sort of indie(ish) which is more accepting of a not perfectly stable shot