overall, I thought it could have been a little shorter, some shots were sort of repetitive. The steadiness has already been pointed out. Also, I wasnt sure what was up with the random transitions, you mostly cut from shot to shot (preferred imo) but sometimes there was a random wipe up with the black bar. Just try and keep your transitions relatively the same so people like me dont focus on the transitions but rather on the edit.
other than that, i thought it was cool man, my roommate's a young life leader so its good/cool to see kids out supporting it!