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Critique My New Video. Thanks

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DavidRoss
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Dec 20 2011 8:47PM
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GrindEdit
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this sucks....
^regular newschooler

haha jk this is sick!
Dec 20 2011 8:56PM
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ktd619
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Fade out at the end...kind of ended abruptly.

Also im i ski BMBW quite often! i liked it!
Dec 20 2011 9:34PM
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Raz.
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my only thought would be to add some color correction
Dec 20 2011 9:38PM
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HoughtonHuffton
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Slight colour correction would make it pretty much perfect.
Dec 20 2011 10:01PM
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Mkvackay
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get better with your tripod. some of your movements are pretty jarring

also don't show the start of your pan. pretty standard
Dec 20 2011 10:59PM
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Tanner-D
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video seemed flat as far as colors
Dec 21 2011 1:01AM
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Dub_Digital
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a lot of your shots were under exposed, and it seemed like you panned to the rail everytime, its fine to do a pan to vary your shots, but gets repetitive, ....also i feel like this song has been used in a ski edit/movie? cant think of what though...
Dec 21 2011 1:24AM
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skitheWest.
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needs more skiing. and a better ending...
Dec 21 2011 1:47AM
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JAHrig
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I think you used the pan from left to right way way too much . Try some different camera movements and some still frames. The repetitiveness really was the main thing I noticed. Other then that more skiers!! I did like the intro shot with the water drops!.
Dec 21 2011 2:58AM
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eheath
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.... what does that even mean? i've never seen you post in here before, have you ever made a video in your life?
Dec 21 2011 3:15AM
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JAHrig
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Also something i have learned in my film classes is always have the first few frames black to give
Dec 21 2011 3:16AM
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JAHrig
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The viewer time to adjust or transition into the clips
Dec 21 2011 3:17AM
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DavidRoss
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Thanks for all the input. Sadly i did this video in WMM becuase vegas gives me the worst technical errors so i couldnt color correct or anything. But thanks everyone!
Dec 21 2011 6:41AM
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finchski
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just cause he doesnt make edits doesnt mean he doesnt watch edits, its his opinion you do need to make an edit to notice colour correction
Dec 22 2011 1:33AM
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DavidRoss
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Let's all get along.... just kidding have at it.
Dec 22 2011 9:52AM
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cwillygood
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idk what you were filming with, but if you can id try and bump up the ISO just a little bit more and put the aperature as low as you can so it lets more light in, when your filming at night, they night shots were pretty dark
Dec 22 2011 9:59AM
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DavidRoss
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60D with 18-55 uhmmm at 1080 24p for night and i think for day aswell. yah i agree but i was getting awful ghosting the more i played with the settings to get it brighter.
Dec 22 2011 10:06AM
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