I've done plenty of concert edits and ski edits for our company www.radmediagroup.ca but I made this to show that I could also successfully film other things. Let me know what you think and why. Cheers.
Either belive you can, or think you can't either way your right
It would be better if there was some sort of plot. This just seems like a bunch of b-roll put together.
Some of your pans needed to be slower and I'm guessing your tripod isn't great - they got jerky at times. Also, not every shot has to be a pan. The change in direction seems to be too sudden.
The shot with the lone sea gull on the rock was WAY too short. Looked like a mistake almost.
Clean your lens! It looked like there were a bunch of spots where you can see stuff on it.
The problem with panning every shot it that you can't really define much composition and there is no real subject for the most part. Not bad stuff, but I wouldn't submit it as part of a resume or anything yet.
I liked the focus shots with the people walking, but the focus could be smoother. Same goes for the shot of the dog from the right side.
"when the government says its necessary to see your genitals, the terrorists have won." - geteducated
But still for a forum that has swayed so many internet contests, fuel tv should be a cake walk. Go go gadget newschoolers.