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The last paragraph

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mtw
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Does anyone else have trouble writing the last paragraph that will finally make your essay complete? I don't mean the conclusion necessarily, but just a paragraph you may have skipped in order to get others done first. I always end up a little short of the length I want, and there's always one paragraph that I know should be in the essay but I can't figure out what to say in it.
May 28 2002 12:09AM
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1080chick
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yes!! i can't write conclusions worth shit
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May 28 2002 12:11AM
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mtw
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Conlusions are the easy part for me. I just basically repeat what I said in the thesis.
May 28 2002 12:38AM
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$1080PLP$
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just bs through the ending thats what i do and i norm get a good grade haha or plagerize(sp)... also include something about skiing it always works haha


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May 28 2002 1:09AM
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CASHIN
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If it's your last paragraph then it is your conclusion.
May 28 2002 1:12AM
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Ski_Instructor_Mike
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the absolute best way is to relate the subject in the same way as you did in the intro as you introduce them and then end with a quote that relates in the same way as your introducion quote.

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May 28 2002 1:22AM
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mtw
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Finally done. Now I can continue being a couch potato and not feel bad because there is no more work for me to do.
May 28 2002 1:55AM
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FreshCoast
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Yeah I used to suck at it because I would only repeat what I said, but now I learned to incorporate deeper understanding into it, kinda hard to explain, I would need to show you somehow!
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May 28 2002 8:43AM
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PocketRocket
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no way, conclusions are easy...what you do is figure out what you're gonna talk about...write a conclusion you wanna get to...then write all the middle stuff that gets you to that conclusion (if it goes a little astray then change the conclusion a bit) and then write the intro to tell all about what you just wrote (this doesnt work too hot on paper...just computers)

May 28 2002 3:04PM
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SkierX
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For a wolluping conclusion, just work in a general lesson that relates to the story. Like a moral, or lesson. Works almost everytime and your teacher thinks yer a genuis.
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May 28 2002 3:19PM
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Drail
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pladgerism... easy and fun.

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May 28 2002 4:39PM
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therealjerk
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the one rule thatll keep you from failing is not to introduce ANY new ideas. my crazy hist. teacher yelled at us for that. we were traumatized. teehee.

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May 28 2002 4:41PM
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snowboy56
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the hardest part of writing a paper for me if the intro~~i can never think of a good way to start any of my papers off but once i start writing my work just flows together and im all set
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May 28 2002 5:23PM
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Drail
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hey gomer - where's the beef?

but um, yea, my english teacher told my class a few weeks ago that in the concluding paragraph always put a little bit more in it than you did in the essay to show that you know more and could go on, but you're going to leave the people (reading it) with wanting more... or something like that.

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May 28 2002 8:04PM
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tremblantripper
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i have that problem too, i guess its cuz i used all my good ideas to start and end the paragraph in the other ones

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May 28 2002 8:37PM
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Gdawg3
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Quotes are definiteley good, quoting Nietschze is a surefire way to impress a teacher. Also, transitions words are important, ie in conlusion, all in all, in summary, etc.


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May 28 2002 8:37PM
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