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First ever edit

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MaMann
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So this is just the bad shots i got of my friends basic tricks, edited together on basic soft ware and i threw it all together just for practice, when i do the real spring edit i will be using high end software my friend has and a different camera.
Yesterday was my first day ever filming, i just broke my collarbone a few weeks back, and because i cannot really ski i decided to film.
Critique is always appreciated
+k for feedback, please not to much hate first time ever guys
Apr 11 2011 2:26AM
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MaMann
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sorry about the weird embed, Feedback= +k
Apr 11 2011 2:31AM
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eheath
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non download link

https://www.newschoolers.com/ns/content/viewvideo/id/421171/member_id/156882/
Apr 11 2011 2:33AM
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eheath
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btw big time facepalm on the song...


good start i suppose, the free frames were annoying. keep practicing.
Apr 11 2011 2:34AM
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MaMann
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+ k thank you, song recommendation? I no major facepalm accepted.
Apr 11 2011 2:38AM
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eheath
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songs that haven't been used and songs that aren't dubstep
Apr 11 2011 2:45AM
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MaMann
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thank you
Apr 11 2011 3:00AM
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Orrin
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Not too bad for a first edit.

Things to work on:

-less camera shake
-music :)
- no freeze frames.
Apr 11 2011 8:03AM
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MaMann
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thank you +k
Apr 11 2011 11:25AM
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VanMelle
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Ya dude stay away from the freeze frames like everyone said, get a better camera and software

Also im sure you just did what a lot of kids who when filming and skiings...swap filming runs or what not..but if possible get a tripod or something to reduce the shaking...

Did you film that on a flip? seems like it had to be a small camera with that amount of shake, or the filmer was freezing and couldnt stop shaking haha

But everyone has to start somewhere right? and def not bad to ask for feedback, if you can take the criticism then thats good!

Best advice is to watch a lot of the top rated videos by the best skiers and filmers, helps give you an idea of what everyone likes, but def create your own style of filming an editing...

Hope that helps
Apr 11 2011 12:53PM
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MaMann
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thank you, yea flip cam, like i said just broke my collarbone like 2 months ago, i cannot personally ski, like really ski, for another 5weeks. i was not planning on getting into filming and editing, but again, i do appreciate feedback and constructive criticism. +k
Apr 11 2011 7:50PM
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MaMann
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song recommendations please?
Apr 11 2011 8:08PM
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VanMelle
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only thing I can say about this is that true filmers and editors will keep their songs to themselves in my experience. Finding good songs that flow and work best with the footage you have are 50% of the editing part. It takes a LONG TIME to find one that works. I have a itunes folder dedicated to only songs that might work for edits and def dont let anyone know what those are besides my riders.

sorry, but usually you have to search and search and search
Apr 11 2011 8:25PM
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TylerDuncan
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This is all you need and practice. Keep it up
Apr 11 2011 11:25PM
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MaMann
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thanks to all of you, more feedback welcome. +k
Apr 12 2011 12:33AM
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MaMann
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still looking for feedback, good night
Apr 12 2011 2:29AM
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MaMann
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thanks for the advice guys
Apr 13 2011 12:51AM
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NickSki.
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Get closer! Especially on the jump shots.
Apr 13 2011 6:13PM
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freeski1924
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work on stabilization. i suggest an X-grip or tripod. me and my filmer had the same problem, and when we borrowed our friends Xg-rip, there was a very noticeable difference. and they only usually run in the 35-40$ range! tripods work too, but they are more of a pain in the ass and you cant really do follow cams with them, which i personally think look better than a stationary shot.

and yes, another song would be good. use one that really described the skiers style and how he rides. If he's a thug, go gansta... If he's a punk, do that... If he's a hippy, play some rasta... you know where im going with this.

good luck, keep it up!
Apr 13 2011 6:36PM
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MaMann
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thanks +k
Apr 13 2011 10:11PM
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blatt
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Miles, in regards to songs you NEVER want to use a song that has been used before in an edit or even worse, in a movie. Only advice is that practice makes perfect. Watch edits on m&a and read people's critiques on them. You'll figure out what's good in an edit and what simply doesn't belong. Just keep at it.
Apr 14 2011 2:10AM
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MaMann
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thanks guys
Apr 15 2011 5:31PM
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MaMann
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thanks again. +k more advice welcome
Apr 17 2011 4:22AM
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Gmart
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i liked it but i wish it was longer and i wish the quality was better but good job for what u have.
Apr 21 2011 11:13AM
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