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Artsy Video Critique

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SkierPT
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Just finished our season edit. I know we aren't that good but I tried to do some artsy stuff with the video. I really like editing and am working hard to get better. Maybe considering it for a college option.Anyways heres the URL

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X-VfCVwTHig

Any critiques of any kind are welcome. Just wondering what people think of the overall video I guess. Thanks. +k for embed and good answers.
Apr 8 2011 6:09PM
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Butt=Tight
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I believe I already have seen this video in another thread you made.   Same as last time tho, try to shoot in better light, i know it isnt always possible, try to use color correct, and have the music flow more with the edit.  The words and lifestyle at the beginning are unneeded, just too much.  Also when you are hitting rails and boxes try to get more speed so your tricks look smoother and bigger, and when you hit jumps try to get more pop so those tricks look bigger, but you guys are solid riders and should be throwin some really good edits out if you keep improving, keep it up!

Apr 8 2011 6:30PM
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SkierPT
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I believe you are looking at the wrong video. Its the first url.
Apr 8 2011 7:08PM
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SkierPT
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But thanks man!

Heres the edit I want critiqued.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X-VfCVwTHig
Apr 8 2011 7:09PM
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screamin_seamen
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Not a whole lot of art in that. But pretty sick for your first edit!!!!!!!
Apr 8 2011 8:29PM
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Brentizzle
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REPOST dude. I embeded this video in another thread a couple days ago because you couldnt embed.



I would not call this an artsy video tho.
Apr 8 2011 10:45PM
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Brentizzle
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this is more artsy if you wana call something artsy.

Calgary Crusin from robert boersma on Vimeo.

Apr 8 2011 10:48PM
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SkierPT
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You embeded the wrong video in the old post. But thanks for the embed either way.
Apr 8 2011 11:51PM
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SkierPT
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Too artsy for my tastes lol
Apr 8 2011 11:54PM
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Brentizzle
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I defs embeded the exact same one. Check.
Apr 9 2011 12:25AM
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WillStart
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dear god i hope you're joking
Apr 9 2011 1:03AM
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screamin_seamen
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Im getting the typical newschoolers head ache haha bet this kids serious
Apr 9 2011 1:54AM
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family_vacation
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I bet the OP would really get along with that super artsy rewind/sin city colors guy from a week or two ago...
Apr 9 2011 2:20AM
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SkierPT
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And I'm getting the typical d-bag replies as usual on this site. Duh winning.
Apr 9 2011 12:19PM
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403MEDIA
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If thats you're first edit its decent dude, just work on colours, and maybe remove some stuff in the intro, like random shots of bird houses, incorporate things that are relevant to your edit and aesthetically pleasing
Apr 9 2011 1:12PM
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Shredability
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Don't do this, when you call it "artsy" your building up a pre conceived idea of "artsy" edits these day, its better to just call it was ski edit, then the "artsy" bits it the beginning is just the intro. I thought it was good btw, just watch your attitude around here. When you first start making edits you have to be humble when asking for feedback and accept any negative feedback you don't like, not everyone is going to like your vid as much as you do, but thats ok because its all about having fun and progressing at a rate that feels good to yourself, ns is just here to help with the progression part
Apr 9 2011 2:03PM
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Gknow
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Not bad, I appreciate the experimentation with different use of auto color/b&w/saturation.... sometimes it works, sometimes it doesn't. The intro I though was well done. It had no relevance to the edit, so it's a little strange. The shots were artsy and looked professional, but it's true what they say about picking your days to shoot. The sun is your friend.
Pick your usable shots carefully. Like, don't let the first shot of skiing be a so-so switch 1 because it sets the wrong tone for the edit. Luckily there were some shots that made up for it and set the tone back on track. But also be careful about shaky camera. No audience member feels good when they watch a shaky shot..only if the trick is good enough to make up for it. But even then, put your camera on a tripod and attach weights to the bottom of it so you can get a semi-flowing shot. Even the still shots, secure the camera in some way.
Good stuff man, keep it up and keep editing.
Apr 9 2011 4:02PM
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SkierPT
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Thanks everyone!
Apr 25 2011 10:59PM
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the.cheat
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if you neeeeed to use viginette, make it subtle at least.
Apr 26 2011 11:24PM
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assface
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any thoughts?

Apr 27 2011 2:48AM
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cultrara
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i loved the urban shot
Apr 27 2011 5:50PM
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