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Feedback on my first edit!

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BenWhit
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Now i realize the skiing isn't really up to par with all the punk NSers who think they're better than everyone else, but it's just me and some of my buds out messing around with my GoPro at various locations. I'd really like some feedback on the editting. I use sony vegas 9, and really just used faders and velocity changes to edit it. i know the shots where i blew it up in slowmo came out like shit, i was just messing around.
Constructive criticism = MAD KARMAZ
Negative ishhh = ass whoopin

Mar 22 2011 11:33AM
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BenWhit
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skiing pointers could be beneficial as well. just don't be a doucher.
Mar 22 2011 11:33AM
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DADDYlongLEGS
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Holy shit that lip on to that rail was so fucked up. You already said it but the slo mo looked really choppy. I also thought you should do something about the lighting. I haven't done a ton of editing but from a skiing perspective, try to pick up your knees while jumping, it looks alot better imo.
Mar 22 2011 12:34PM
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BenWhit
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appreciated, dude! i don't know much about editting, just learning. i'm going to mess around with color correction and such
Mar 22 2011 1:33PM
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ripper_shredder
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on your spins, your throwing your shoulders back and not using your arms to set and that is making you get back. make sure you come off the jump with forward pressure in your boots and not to throw your shoulders back. I also noticed at 0:39, you could of easily brought that to kfed. just keep your rotation going!

ya otherwise, try adjusting your levels using the color curves effect. I find it is easier to slow down your clips by holding ctrl and dragging the clip from behind.
Mar 22 2011 6:54PM
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JRyder
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yup do this. changing the velocity just fucks everything up
Mar 22 2011 7:16PM
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Brentizzle
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yay coach jeremy. But yeah.

As for the filming/editing portion, if you going to slow down shots as much as you did and get it to still look smooth then you are going to need something like twixtor to create your slow motion. there where also a lot of shots that you repeated the same trick or a crash on the same trick and it just made it look a bit more amateur (no hate). you could also get closer when filming with you gopro because it does have a really wide angle fisheye.
Mar 22 2011 7:29PM
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BenWhit
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appreciated. i've had some issues with my spinning as of late, i only get to ski every couple of weekends so progressing and maintaining my tricks can be an issue!
Mar 22 2011 7:33PM
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BenWhit
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haha it was amateur because i am amateur! i know you're not hating i appreciate the feedback. my little bro did most of the filming, which is why all the shots of me are so far away. is twixtor free?
Mar 22 2011 7:34PM
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Brentizzle
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nope. unless you can find a torrent. search it in google and read a bit about it and what programs it works with.
Mar 22 2011 7:46PM
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BenWhit
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will do, i appreciate it dude
Mar 22 2011 7:46PM
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SkiThe603
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It was a nice edit, slo-mo was choppy, but otherwise the opening was really nice. I don't really know anything for the skiing perspective because can't do shit, but ya nice,
Mar 22 2011 9:51PM
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BenWhit
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MAD KARMAZZZ ALL AROUND FOR MY DUDES
Mar 22 2011 10:15PM
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Ukrainian-Vibe
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I liked this edit.. my only suggestion is to use different angles/ perspectives for consecutive shots. like when you were sliding the rails with the gopro spread them out because sometimes it looked like the same shot over and over or like a jump cut... thats my only criticism so good job!
Mar 22 2011 10:46PM
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BenWhit
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thanks dude. i'll give it a try!
Mar 22 2011 10:56PM
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Dwarftosser1
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I liked it personally, the slow-mo was a little choppy and the colors could of been better, but for a first edit it was very nice
Mar 22 2011 11:31PM
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