no audio with the moving lips, lift shots were kinda slow, fade to black was annoying most of the time. Otherwise you did an ok job of lining up clips in a row over a song. You could have a promising career making funeral home slide shows.
sorry if that was too sharp, I had just watched knut go down and was in mourning. your edittt it wasn't that bad, you know which shots are too far away, or fogged up. It can always be faster, and.... that's about it. I wouldn't waste your time color correcting yet, maybe just the bangers. Take screen direction into consideration and use cool transitions like star wipes when appropriate(or fades to black they are just as cool). Other than that its a pretty standard clip show, mostly killer just a lil filler that could have been tightened up. Also, workstation ergonomics are important.